11/11/2009

Waving Goodbye

A Child

Pats the water with her foot

Ripples

Spread gently, caressing the surface

Gliding outward, searching for shore

Fading to smooth


Tiny toes

Break the fluid plain

Movement

Life upon the stillness

Reaching

Longing

Hoping for a place to land


Again and again

Each gentle touch fades

Weakened waves reaching

Never touching the distant sand

Destination


SPLASH!


Surges churn turbulence of sea

Arms and legs violate the stillness

Liquid rage calls

To the depths

Unknown concentric waves

Demanding, diminishing, stopping


Stillness

Descending shimmers

Calming the spot

Closing the circle

Cessation


Now

On a distant shore

Small ripples lap the sand

Lap the sand

Home


-Once, an Adolescent that I knew took her own life. This poem is dedicated to Cathy.

4 comments:

  1. Very moving poem. I like the dedication you added at the end. It gives the poem a poignant feeling.

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  2. Very touching words! Beautiful way to remember someone... thanks for sharing!

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  3. Oh my. I think I'll have to read it again. I read it as a very young person playing at sensations and then the end...Oh my. I had wondered at the words violate and rage the first time through. I'll take my time the second.

    What a strange way to take ones own life. Poetic in one way, but violent as well. Any way would be I suppose.

    I do like the arriving home. It grants quiet to the water.
    xo
    erin

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  4. But then you didn't directly say she took her life by water, did you...

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Whew! For a moment I thought you were leaving without commenting. Thanks!