The earth under foot Passing Thoughts fade into Absence Embraces singularity Feels Effortless striding Forth Coming homeward Bound Less of me resting Heavy Burdens dripping Soaking Into the soil beneath Me
It's beautiful Kim. I really love how you can say so much with so few words...a real gift of a good writer. Yes, I'm back! I'm glad you stopped by last night...your comment waiting for me was most welcome, thank you. I've just joined your blogging network on Facebook- I hope that's okay. I'm proud to say I read your blog. Bella :)
I really love this poem, Kim. It expresses just how it feels when you're hiking, surrounded by nothing but quiet and nothing to do but forget about real life for awhile. It makes me want to get out for a hike!
It's beautiful Kim. I really love how you can say so much with so few words...a real gift of a good writer.
ReplyDeleteYes, I'm back! I'm glad you stopped by last night...your comment waiting for me was most welcome, thank you.
I've just joined your blogging network on Facebook- I hope that's okay. I'm proud to say I read your blog.
Bella :)
thank you Bella! and welcome to my facebook connection!
ReplyDelete"less of me resting heavy"
ReplyDelete-- Adored this line especially; it speaks volumes, and goes well with the title of the piece. Cheers.
I really love this poem, Kim. It expresses just how it feels when you're hiking, surrounded by nothing but quiet and nothing to do but forget about real life for awhile. It makes me want to get out for a hike!
ReplyDeletesic - you are kind. i like that line, too. there may be another peom there...
ReplyDeletepaige - thanks. i went hiking again this weekend as evidenced by the newest post.
i love hiking, and need to do more of it. Thanks for the visit
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