6/07/2013

Miasma Episode I


NOTE: This is a creative writing piece and could be one of a series that creates a fantasy character to allow for observational prose...


My name is Miasma. Actually, Miasma isn't my real name and if I tried to tell you my real name your ears would not hear it nor would your mind grasp it, so for you and the world you see, I am Miasma.

I am a watcher of people and their things for in my watching I find some degree of comfort, some measure of essence that I would otherwise lose and soon I might fade beyond the reach of this world. I cannot touch it or you anymore, so I watch. My presence is veiled to you, no more than the wisp of a cloud or the last mist of a spring morning. I can only watch. I watch the beauty and the ugliness.

Today I watch her, this child with brilliant blue eyes, dancing with light. If you would see her you would most likely be so struck by the particular shade of azure blue brimming from her eyes that you might miss the truly brilliant light that is her eagerness of being as it radiates into the world around her. Yes, I see this radiance. Some might discount her shine as youthful and untainted enthusiasm, but I know better. I have seen this before and today as I watch her trace her fingers along the cracked mortar between the smooth wall stones, I know that this youngling is a rare and delicate version among your kind. She hums a simple tune, one that rises from her inner being and as her wordless song touches the air and all around her I feel the urge to bow, I and every form of life around her would sway upon her song if she only wished it so. She doesn't, for she doesn't know how, yet...

7 comments:

  1. Kim, this is breathtaking...

    It really is...

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  2. thank you, S.

    i was just over at one of your places (i get them mixed up) and I do enjoy your poetry.

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  3. Hi, Kim. Thanks for your comments at my place. Wow! This site is absolutely beautiful! Do you ever hire insane writer/poets? Just kidding. But I will stick around and try to learn from you. This is great.

    Your writing is lovely. I especially love "She hums a simple tune, one that rises from her inner being and as her wordless song touches the air and all around her I feel the urge to bow, I and every form of life around her would sway upon her song if she only wished it so." Beautiful.

    Most of my work comes from watching people and, of course, from listening. Complete strangers come up to me in the grocery store and tell me their stories. Maybe they see me watching them. Or maybe I give off vibes. I love to watch and listen.

    Thank you for saying hello, because it gave me the opportunity to read what you have here. It's nice to meet you.

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  4. P.S. - I just read that you're in Winston-Salem. *Waving* Carolina girl here. Have a good one.

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  5. thanks for dropping by, Julie. I'm excited about finding you, as well.

    until our next click...

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  6. I like how you develop this!

    SG

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  7. SG- Thanks. There is ore to this piece. it developed into an unexpected twist - even beyond this.

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Whew! For a moment I thought you were leaving without commenting. Thanks!